foxsable

I have fixed at least some of  my point of view problems.  I started the story in first person unreliable, then I came back to third person semi-omnitient, and now I am back to third person.  It’s working though.  I also stopped giving away so much at the beginning, and stopped taking shortcuts.  Sure it’s convenient to have names for things, but that will come in time.  I also digressed from mystical knowledge of things to using nicknames for things, which stick.  It’s all working out.  Tonight, more editing

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